This was a very engaging read. Easy to get through, and I wanted to get through it. Honestly, I'd like to read a longer version. I wondered if something supernatural were coming.
Some really powerful turns of phrases. I love the line about uncapping a drain. I think the image went on just a bit too long - few too many words in that simile, but the artistic skill was clear there. Good work.
There's a pretty hard pivot where things turn to sex and sexuality. I confess I didn't see that coming, and I didn't quite get it, either. But it was just a brief hiccup. Strong finish.
My sister-in-law is a quad amputee who's also a PhD and Biologist. She struggles with phantom limb pain, so this was pretty close to home for me.
No comments! What a shame.
This was a very engaging read. Easy to get through, and I wanted to get through it. Honestly, I'd like to read a longer version. I wondered if something supernatural were coming.
Some really powerful turns of phrases. I love the line about uncapping a drain. I think the image went on just a bit too long - few too many words in that simile, but the artistic skill was clear there. Good work.
There's a pretty hard pivot where things turn to sex and sexuality. I confess I didn't see that coming, and I didn't quite get it, either. But it was just a brief hiccup. Strong finish.
My sister-in-law is a quad amputee who's also a PhD and Biologist. She struggles with phantom limb pain, so this was pretty close to home for me.
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